First attempt at OSL, I'm not happy with it but not sure what I'm doing wrong. Any advice would be awesome. zNSFW

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User: TK81337

Categories: minipainting

Mom got me some paints from idk where...

Centaurs(NSFW)

Found out my coworker paints Warhammer figs when I told him I play D&D, so

Recommendations for the detail work (dry brushing, highlights, etc)?

(nsfw) Should I water my paint down more? It's looking a little THICC